Critique of Jay Z remix using Ableton Live

[kritzer]

Just completed this remix with the Kill Bill soundtrack for some main samples.

Let me know what you think about the composition as well as the mix/mastering.

I used Izotope Ozone 3 to master it and then just hard limited the hell out of it.

Let me know.

 

[Teacher]

well the vocals sound good

drums sound weak and everything just sound hollow like to much reverb. its not full and 'phat' sounding at all

see compare yours to this

http://www.sicbeats.com/data/SICbeats-ImOnaMission(teach269).mp3

sorry had to toot my own horn

 

[kritzer]

yea sorry bout that

Posted an earlier mixdown with the drums way too soft. It has been updated same link as above. This bass is a lot tighter (maybe a little too loud). Let me know any other suggestions please!

 

[Teacher]

Posted an earlier mixdown with the drums way too soft. It has been updated same link as above. This bass is a lot tighter (maybe a little too loud). Let me know any other suggestions please!

still sounds like shit.