Hi! I’m making an effort to post feedback since I am new here and know how helpful unbias feedback can be.
First of all, anyone who creates anything and puts it out there for others to hear has already done something many would be too afraid to do, so bravo to you.
My question on this piece is: who is the intended audience? What is the intended purpose? To my ear, It has a lot of dissonance in the chords...which have an unsettling nature....which seems like it would be good for building anticipation in a horror or crime show...perhaps the piece is intended to evoke an unsettled vibe
As for technical things...I’m a newby so can’t offer much help.