I'm pleased with how this came out, but I'm not sure if it needs a lead. When I wrote it I had a lead in mind but drew a blank when it came to laying one down.
I'll have the other guitarist I work with have a try. After about 30 minutes of noodling last night, even trying the guitar across my lap doing some tapping, I just couldn't find anything that worked and didn't seem forced. I'm not the greatest lead player, especially high energy stuff like this.