New song - Foo Fighters/Pearl Jam

[gilbert]

Hey guys

It's very much a demo - it needs more electric guitar, but my guitar neck is cracked. Your comments on the structure, instrument arrangement, and the song itself would be very helpful.

It's track 4 on my player at http://people.aapt.net.au/celebritymusic/ss/strikingsmith.html - it's a streaming player, so no need to wait for a download.

Cheers

Tommy T

 

[faderbug]

starry eyes is that the song?

sounds really good, very nice pop tune. there are some great ideas in there, good production, great arrangement, singing, playing ...

where would you put the electric guitars?

it reminds me of a band called dEUS.