
SLuiCe
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The site seems to be moving at a reasonable pace today....
Jeff sent me the instruments for this like 2 months ago, but I never could get into the "right" mood for it to write something. I liked it, but it moved in ways I was not (<-edit) accustomed to. Which brings me to a point...without a doubt the best thing a collaboration can do for you is push your envelop.
So I got snowed outa work today and decided to tackle this tune. I had a couple small ideas (both lyrical and melodic) going into it, and just started sculpting as I recorded. I've done all the vocals and mixing over the past 4 hours so Jeff hasn't heard it yet. Seems pretty cool when I listen back to it...but what do you guys think?
" Come Out Come Out "
Thanks guys
...hope you like it Jeff.
(By the way...nice guitar solo!)
Lyrics (for those who pay attention to that stuff
)
Come Out Come Out
Call me paranoid, but I heard his urgings
Reminders of my life and bridges I'm burning
I hold my face in disbelief
I'm trapped beneath his memory
Even if I could get through, would I even try?
When your life becomes song
And your song is life-long...
"Where have all the hours gone?
What have I done wrong"
Come out for love
Your lady is expecting you
Come out for love
She may not wait for you
Pull the curtains closed, slam all the doors tight
Nothing must get through, not even daylight
Need time to think.
I'm on the brink of finding all the missing links
Maybe I will not get through
But I've gotta try to keep his vision alive!
"Come out come out
Whatever you're trying to find
I'll leave you in there to die
It's taking you too far away
Come out come out
It's worse than you realize
It will swallow us both alive
You'll follow him too far away from me"
Jeff sent me the instruments for this like 2 months ago, but I never could get into the "right" mood for it to write something. I liked it, but it moved in ways I was not (<-edit) accustomed to. Which brings me to a point...without a doubt the best thing a collaboration can do for you is push your envelop.
So I got snowed outa work today and decided to tackle this tune. I had a couple small ideas (both lyrical and melodic) going into it, and just started sculpting as I recorded. I've done all the vocals and mixing over the past 4 hours so Jeff hasn't heard it yet. Seems pretty cool when I listen back to it...but what do you guys think?
" Come Out Come Out "
Thanks guys
...hope you like it Jeff.
(By the way...nice guitar solo!)
Lyrics (for those who pay attention to that stuff

Come Out Come Out
Call me paranoid, but I heard his urgings
Reminders of my life and bridges I'm burning
I hold my face in disbelief
I'm trapped beneath his memory
Even if I could get through, would I even try?
When your life becomes song
And your song is life-long...
"Where have all the hours gone?
What have I done wrong"
Come out for love
Your lady is expecting you
Come out for love
She may not wait for you
Pull the curtains closed, slam all the doors tight
Nothing must get through, not even daylight
Need time to think.
I'm on the brink of finding all the missing links
Maybe I will not get through
But I've gotta try to keep his vision alive!
"Come out come out
Whatever you're trying to find
I'll leave you in there to die
It's taking you too far away
Come out come out
It's worse than you realize
It will swallow us both alive
You'll follow him too far away from me"
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