don't let it end

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apologies to anyone i promised drum tracks. this song got in the way of everything and i'm determined to actually finish it before i do anything else.

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=1445&alid=-1
'don't let it end'

oh, and more apologies to everyone for not checking out more tunes lately. i just don't have access to bandwidth right now, so i 'm only able to download like one song per night. :(
 
Yeah...we're all pissed...


That you don't post songs more often.

Be Right Back

[edit] Yeah, I'm back. This is excellent. I think the acoustic tones are PERFECT. You sing too good to be a drummer.

drunken sunrises rule.

I'd like more low end in the mix overall, but I find myself saying that a lot these days...maybe I need to find the "BASS" knob on this 'puter and turn it up.

I really like this a lot. Thanks for posting it.

Chris
 
i just gave my self 5 stars as a preemptive strike to the guy who's going around giving out 1 star all the time.......um.....not that i pay attention to that :D
 
Awesome. Nice song. The drums sound real subtle, but about perfect to my ears on these little Rolands.

Good job!
 
yup, I'm glad you wanted to work on this tune. thanks for sharing it. great stuff.

dtb
 
Hey Eric Henry,
....ok, I finally get the username:confused: :) Nice song man.
The acoustics sound nice, and i like the song structure. Nice vocs too! The female voc that kicks in at around 2:40 might be just a touch loud. The full harmonies after that kick major butt.
Great stuff eric,




g
 
Hi Eric,

This is delicious! Very smooth sound. Although the stereo field is very narrow (except when choir kicks in), the mix is very clear and defined.
Everything just sounds great, man :).

Usually I don't ask this, but would you care to describe in short how you recorded/produced the vox and acoustic guitar - including the hardware used ? I'd be very thankful.

Great tune.

Best regards
Erik
 
Well done EH. To me there is something incongruous about the drums. Like either turn 'em up a little, or replace them with a simple percussion track. That's subjective of course, you know what you want. Nice job on good song.

Twist
 
This is a great song.













































made better by percussive noises :D
(inside joke?)

-Mr. "I'm not dissing drums" and I'll be back at work tomorrow anyway.

***** 4 U
 
Well dammit, I'm getting tired of not being able to find complaints with y'all's stuff... I find so many with my own.

This is a really nice one. I think the drums are really nicely integrated & things as a whole blend really well. This song has a nice "sweetness" that's rare IMO (it's so easy to cross the line into saccharine).

I'd also be interested in a micing rundown.

Bravo!

Chris
 
Nice tune Eric, voice is great, real good harmonies at the end, interesting chord changes at the end, I agree with Twist about the drums, the arrangement sounds a bit unfinished at times.

Macle
 
The begining was a bit sudden..I don't klnow if that makes sense. I can't really get used to the vocal style. drums are a little machiney.

What do I know.

I guess just not my style.

I'm gonna get flamed by someone.
 
Nice song eric! Great damn singing man..really good. Thanks for sharing...
 
happy halloween

thanks everyone for listening. this one means a lot to me. i asked a player to be named later to fill in the last section with a guitar solo. we'll see. i think that would really round this out a lot.

now i'm gonna go backwards on y'all:

David. thanks, this song means a lot to me.

jake-owa. i sure hope you don't get flamed for being honest! the sudden onset of vocals to kick off a tune is something i've become addicted to lately. but then again, i hate previews and hate long beginnings in general. like to get straight to business usually. hence, i'm pretty bad a negotiations. so you liked the drums the first time, but not after another listen? i'm having a lot of trouble with them myself actually.

macle. thanks for listening. you're like the prototype hom rec'er from what i can tell so any advice you can give i devour. i'm having a hell of a time getting the level on the snare drum right. it's really the key to the whole drum track imo. lot's of ghost notes that i really liked after i played it back, but damn if that thing isn't getting buried in the mix! when i turn it up, it spikes and i just gotta compress it again to get any volume outta everything else. maybe some eq magic will help? maybe a new drummer?

groucho. ok here's the details and they aren't pretty, it's just what i have at my disposal.
- the guitar is a taylor 314 auditorium style (elixer ultra thin coated strings) miced with two radio shack pzm's in creative x-y position (thanks to the mic forum guys for that suggestion) sent through an old yamaha mixer for preamps then to the mona card. also put an akgc3000b about 8 inches off the 12th fret going through a joe meek vc3. a little eq on the tracks to roll off the boom around 40 hz and lower. also boosted some highs a little. slightly compressed at about 2-1 ratio at -3db from the peaks.
- the vocals are the hole in my head about 8 inches back from the c3000b going into the vc3 (fairly light compression on the vc3) then to the mona. the tracks were further compressed pretty heavily at about 3-1 ratio at like -6db from the peaks.

chris. you crack me up. and to have a sense of humor given what you just went through is outstanding. sorry to hear about the health problems. i lost the hearing in my right ear this summer for about a month and i was not a nice person to be around. oh, and i started out as a drummer, then evolved into a piano player, and now i'm trying to find my way as a singer cause that's what i like to do best. guitar is beyond my comprehension. only play it out of necessity.

twist. i'm gonna use the word incongruous tomorrow for sure! it'll find it's way into a song eventually. thanks for that! the drums are a thorn in my side here. especially the snare drum. i think if it had more whack and presence to it, it would be better, but i don't know. i'm open to any offers to replace the drums.

Erick O. see response above for micing details. it ain't pretty. stereo field was another problem i knew would come up so i'm glad you said something. i tried to widen it with nero's stereo widener cause that's all i have and it sounded like shit. sounded wide but a lot of frequencies got mangled in the process. anyone know a good plug in for stereo? thanks for listening dude.

Guernica. thanks for listening. that female voice is me :o glad you like the harmonies. i just love doing that stuff.

dtb. thanks for listening. your last post kicks ass. i too check my mixes in my car as a last step.

erichenryus. what kind of self serving prick are you giving yourself 5 stars?!?!!?
 
Really nice tune!

I especially liked the acoustic,sweet,how did you record it?
Vocals were really good,nice harmonies.

This is a very fine song,thanks for sharing it!

Pete
 
pete, thanks for the kind words. check out the post above yours for details on the recording.
 
Nice and clean recording here. Cool song as well. My favorite part was the tag with those harmonies--when you harmonize like that you are creating a very cool and seductive sound. Ought to make use of more of that cause its a strength. Good drumming, of course. I could have stood to have the drums up a bit more into the foreground on this one.

You're getting a good sound. So what were these drums from? They sound good.

Hey, I''d give you five stars, but since you already gave YOURSELF five, I guess I don't have to, eh? :D
 
Re: happy halloween

erichenryus said:


macle. thanks for listening. you're like the prototype hom rec'er from what i can tell so any advice you can give i devour. i'm having a hell of a time getting the level on the snare drum right. it's really the key to the whole drum track imo. lot's of ghost notes that i really liked after i played it back, but damn if that thing isn't getting buried in the mix! when i turn it up, it spikes and i just gotta compress it again to get any volume outta everything else. maybe some eq magic will help? maybe a new drummer?


Hey Eric, regarding the drums, first I have a problem with the sounds (it's an electronic kit, right?) I know people have different tastes around here, but I especially think on an organic song like this, to have those sorts of sounds just doesn't work. There also seems a problem with the groove (are those electronic drums quantized, cuz I kinda think they should be, oddly enough). Maybe the acoustic should come down, instead of bringing the snare up. One thing you could try (if you wanted to take the time) to get the ghost notes up, is go through and use automation, and lower the volume on the main snare, and raise on the ghosts, instead of using compression. Are you playing the drums to the acoustic? Was the acoustic played to a click? Just doesn't seem in the pocket to me. And, that roll at around 1:25 has got to go!

Macle (drum Nazi)
 
Hi Eric.
To me the drums are pretty shallow. I'd bring them up a bit along with the bass.
Like the song, really like your voice.
Great song.
 
I'm surprised nobody commented about the bass sound yet. That was the first thing that caught my ear. Really nice sound on the bass. The bass part wasn't real intricate, but the sound was terrific.

The voice and guitars sounded real nice. A word or two from the vox got buried here and there, but not real bad. I liked the song as well.

I liked the drum part, but the sound was a little weak. Could be a bit stronger. I would have prefered harmonies to come in earlier. Excuse my nit-picks.

Nice song.
 
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