Crack (Finally composed one)

[ammarg89]

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/songInfo.cfm?bandID=524655&songID=4496050

Its a composed beat, im not a big fan of composing caus eim not good at it, please leave some feed, alsoi fyou cann tell me whta you think of teh mxing, ive bene trying to get betetr ta it but im not sure if i am.

 

[Trumpspade]

I'll wait to comment!

I'm not sure if you're serious or not

 

[Noddy301]

Whats wrnog wthi yoru keybaord??

 

[ammarg89]

err...i guess i was just typing too fast, so can i get that feedback Plus im dislexic so i mix up the letters when i read...sorry about that, i have to type really slowly and carefully.

 

[jugalo180]

you did a good job at making this composition sound like a sample. if you can add some more change ups and take the drums out here and there this would sound a lot better. layer some strings over that piano for the hook and that would sound very hot, to me at least. i don't like how the piano drops out into the background instead of just dropping out completely. instead of dropping the piano completely switch it to a lower octave and see how that sounds. This is a smooth joint, I think it needs a bassline to fuse it together.