any tips on improvement

[tshirt]

hey people.
this is a demo i put together and it'd be great if i could get some feedback on what to change for the final piece. do ye think i should change the vocalist, record it in a different manner, use more guitar, less organ etc..
thanx.

 

[cubanorocker316]

tiny bit less organ. tiny bit more guitar.

hope this helps.

- Lou

 

[Slowrider]

Yeah, bringup the guitar some; not bad, though. Smooth, reminds me of Donovan...well if anyone's old enough to remember him?

 

[MadAudio]

Smooth, reminds me of Donovan...well if anyone's old enough to remember him?

He was the guy with the brocade coat that used to sing to us about Atlantis.....

 

[tshirt]

do ye think that the vocals are a bit dodgy though or do they suffice?