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  1. J

    New Lyrics - feedback appreciated.

    Actually, yet it is! :) There's underlying humor in the song...people saw a shepherd boy, but God said he was a King...same for the fish and feast. The exaggeration was only in our eyes, because by the end, God proved himself right and us wrong. The Lord Almighty knows the spirit in which...
  2. J

    New Lyrics - feedback appreciated.

    Dang...I knew that line looked familiar... it even has the same rythym! hmmm...will have to fix that. That's the same problem I have with trying to make my own music...I usually wind up with a "copied" tune in my head I'm writing to. Funny thing is, I once wrote two "songs" to the same...
  3. J

    New Lyrics - feedback appreciated.

    I struggled a bit with the "untruthfulness" implied in "exaggeration." In the song, I see at one of two ways...the untruthfulness is only when we see things through our eyes, not His; and I use it as an synonym of "to magnify". Besides, I thought it was much more musical and just plain fun. :)...
  4. J

    Whats born first; your chorus or your verse

    Sometimes I think I'm writing a chorus and wind up with a verse, and visa-versa (no pun intended.) I recently was writing what was supposed to be a song but couldn't come up with a chorus for it, so I just left the chorus out and called it a poem rather than lyrics. What I hate is when I come...
  5. J

    New Lyrics - feedback appreciated.

    The Great Exaggerator (c)copyright 2007 by Jeff Blessing David was a little shepherd boy a long, long time ago, Nobody had any clue just how far that he would go First he killed a giant with just a sling and a stone, Next thing we know, David’s sitting on the throne. You make something out of...
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