phlopip

hi man,
i've listen to your song since you gave it to me,the style is rocky ,and somehow metal,but here is a problem and it is the way you arrange your VARSE and CHORUS,i think (this is my idea) you should arrange them in the way that each chord make more room to sing on it,i mean when it shouldnt be like when you start your sentece suddenly the chord change and so on,the chords change quick so it is hard to sing rock on it.
i wanna thank you because you trust me and sent your song,and sorry that i couldnt help you,rock ON buddy.

So i'm here,
give me the detail if you want.

i did give a positive rep mate. if it didnt come across as that then i must of made a mistake. you've been very helpful and informative so thank you for your time to assist a newbie

Can't tell if you gave me a negative rep or you haven't the ability to give out reps yet? What do you think?