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Otherwise, any other suggestions would kick ass.

Ditch that stupid looking hat.

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Your intakes of breath are really only noticeable because it's such a quiet, sparse track. If you listen to a huge range of singers on records, you might be surprized how many of them take sharp intakes of breath. I was always going on at a friend of mine who, when singing would really draw in breaths and because she would be singing to just bass/drums or guitar/drums/percussion {putting in all the other instruments just made it confusing}, I'd really notice it. We talked about it for years. Then not long ago, I began to look out for whether or not singers down the ages were good breath controllers. Some are wonderful, some really are not. But that has never taken away from a great vocal performance that I can recall.
In this instance, I agree with
Sounds pretty good. Your breath control ain't bad. Tone's good and pitch okay.
You've got a good voice.
 
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