lend_me_talent
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OK the consensus here is that my songs are too long. So here it something I just wrote. So this is my attempt to write a short song. This is not my usual style, but what the hell give me your worst.
RIDDLE
It is beauty empirical
and love spiritual
Though its so complicated
From it I could not be seperated
Its nothing less than my life
The essence from which all joys are derrived
CHORUS
Riddle me with questions
Of my thoughts and my emotions
Knowing no answer could appease
Or bring ease to gnawing insecurities
Its moving at a breakneck pace
With your feet in the same place
Though it consumes you whole
Without it there can be no soul
Its can be nothing but a word sometimes
Unless two people believe its otherwise
© Joe Ford 2003
Ok so does this song suck or is it a potentially good? I dont have any melody or anything figured out yet.
Ok back to the fuckin beer
RIDDLE
It is beauty empirical
and love spiritual
Though its so complicated
From it I could not be seperated
Its nothing less than my life
The essence from which all joys are derrived
CHORUS
Riddle me with questions
Of my thoughts and my emotions
Knowing no answer could appease
Or bring ease to gnawing insecurities
Its moving at a breakneck pace
With your feet in the same place
Though it consumes you whole
Without it there can be no soul
Its can be nothing but a word sometimes
Unless two people believe its otherwise
© Joe Ford 2003
Ok so does this song suck or is it a potentially good? I dont have any melody or anything figured out yet.
Ok back to the fuckin beer