church_bites
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So I'm in a band which shall remain nameless, and I really love a lot of the musical stuff we're doing, but our singer/rhythm guitarist writes really simple, juvenile lyrics. Here's an example of one of his better works:
Verse 1: Sometimes, all does not seem right and then
I wonder, when in the night, will come, to an end
and when will you, rescue you me old friend
Chorus: And then, somehow, you hold me in your arms
You still, allow me to be free, and yet
You never let me go too far, you tell of all your dreams for me
I am yours (repeated)
Verse 2: I have not, lost hope yet, because I know
You have a dream for me, to fulfill even when it seems
too big
Repeat chorus.
Now, I personally think this is terrible lyric writing, and our music really deserves better lyrics than this. What do you think? I'd like to get a lot of different opinions here.
Verse 1: Sometimes, all does not seem right and then
I wonder, when in the night, will come, to an end
and when will you, rescue you me old friend
Chorus: And then, somehow, you hold me in your arms
You still, allow me to be free, and yet
You never let me go too far, you tell of all your dreams for me
I am yours (repeated)
Verse 2: I have not, lost hope yet, because I know
You have a dream for me, to fulfill even when it seems
too big
Repeat chorus.
Now, I personally think this is terrible lyric writing, and our music really deserves better lyrics than this. What do you think? I'd like to get a lot of different opinions here.