Hey, everyone! I'm new here, and also fairly new to songwriting, but I want to ask everyone's opinion of my lyrical ideas, so let me know. . . keep 'em or trash 'em???
Song Title: "Girls"
This is a song about some of my favorite things. . ./
They're soft, cuddly, and fun to play with. . ./
This is a song about GIRLS!!!!!!!!!!!!/
I used to write songs 'bout girls but I never got laid/
I used to write songs 'bout chicks but it's always the same/
Now I write songs about ladies, but they don't want to hear it/
I'd write a song about women, but they won't understand it/
Pre-Chorus: Like E.C. said, "It's how you use it"/
Sometimes, it's russian roulette/
Chorus: I'm talkin' bout Girls!/
It's all about Girls. . ./
Nothin' but Girls. . ./
All about Girls!/
Now as I sit in this restaurant tryin' to write this damn song/
I'm drawin' a blank/
Can't write songs about Girls anymore/
'cuz I've got one in the band. . ./
Hell, I'd write a song about the waitress with the nice booty/
but she wouldn't have a use for it/
All she wants from me is a tip/
hah! SERVICE WITH A SMILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!/
Wooooo!!!!!!!!
The End
Well?????????
Thumbs up, or thumbs down???
Is this the song that'll make me a million and get me laid three (or four!) times a night, or not. . .
Be kind!
Brian
Song Title: "Girls"
This is a song about some of my favorite things. . ./
They're soft, cuddly, and fun to play with. . ./
This is a song about GIRLS!!!!!!!!!!!!/
I used to write songs 'bout girls but I never got laid/
I used to write songs 'bout chicks but it's always the same/
Now I write songs about ladies, but they don't want to hear it/
I'd write a song about women, but they won't understand it/
Pre-Chorus: Like E.C. said, "It's how you use it"/
Sometimes, it's russian roulette/
Chorus: I'm talkin' bout Girls!/
It's all about Girls. . ./
Nothin' but Girls. . ./
All about Girls!/
Now as I sit in this restaurant tryin' to write this damn song/
I'm drawin' a blank/
Can't write songs about Girls anymore/
'cuz I've got one in the band. . ./
Hell, I'd write a song about the waitress with the nice booty/
but she wouldn't have a use for it/
All she wants from me is a tip/
hah! SERVICE WITH A SMILE!!!!!!!!!!!!!/
Wooooo!!!!!!!!
The End
Well?????????
Thumbs up, or thumbs down???
Is this the song that'll make me a million and get me laid three (or four!) times a night, or not. . .
Be kind!
Brian