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    new song today

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    Here are a few of the words I wrote down, the rest are still out there somewhere, and must be found at a different time.....
    These came just about as quick as you can read them...

    Did you make a wish

    when you blew out the candles

    Did you make a wish

    An' were you hopin it would come true



    Did you close your eyes

    when you threw the coins in the fountain

    an' did you dream of a better time



    Was it all just a motion

    or did it feel true

    flame dies with a breath

    the coins slippin thru



    I once had a chance to...

    to be what I dreamed

    but lifes only answer

    was for these eyes not to see



    Did you make a wish

    an' were you hopin..

    did you make a wish

    when the shooting star flew...

    Did you make a wish

    did you dream of a river

    did you make a wish

    an what was it really like...

    an what was it really like ?

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    That has some really good imagery!

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