new song, let me know what you think

kylosius

I Like Rusty Spoons
the way i wrote this can leave it open to any interpretation you can possibly think of. i think it's pretty decent. it's also more folk than punk (which if anyone here still remember me, i mainly write punk tunes). if you wanna give it a listen, its at http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=2635&alid=-1 let me know what you guys think.

somewhere in the past and present
i hear your voice calling me
please come forward
your voice sings a broken tune
so beautiful and subdued
lead me away i say
to this place of mystery
to that place of ecstacy
pull me down
kiss me with your tender lips
i wanna feel you in my grip
and never let you go

don't slip away, to memory
please stay, please stay

somewhere in the past and present
i hear your voice calling me
you say i'm sorry
your voice sings somber tune
still beautiful though subdued
goodbye, goodbye
to my place so far away
to my place of misery
bringing me down
kiss me with your tenders lips
kiss me for one last time before
i'm gone, i'm gone

don't slip away, to memory
please stay, please stay
 
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