jeff5xo
New member
Ok guys here's a new one I just wrote. I still haven't written a bridge for it yet. It's mid tempo rock.
Good Days / Bad Days
Another day of feeling sad and lonely
this life's so phoney
I can't be the only one that
Feels all alone in this confusion
this constitution
of false illusions
Pre
I'm not begging for the sunshine
I just want the rain to end
Chorus
The good days the bad days
the in-between and sideways
the ins and the outs
tell me what's it all about
When you're reaching for something
and end up with nothing
you lose and then you win
then it happens all again
Forgive me now for feeling sad and broken
my false hoping
has gone out the window
Give me something that I can believe in
that doesn't leave me
in the deep end
Pre
Chorus
Let me know what you think. Has it been done too many times??? Should I dump it??
Good Days / Bad Days
Another day of feeling sad and lonely
this life's so phoney
I can't be the only one that
Feels all alone in this confusion
this constitution
of false illusions
Pre
I'm not begging for the sunshine
I just want the rain to end
Chorus
The good days the bad days
the in-between and sideways
the ins and the outs
tell me what's it all about
When you're reaching for something
and end up with nothing
you lose and then you win
then it happens all again
Forgive me now for feeling sad and broken
my false hoping
has gone out the window
Give me something that I can believe in
that doesn't leave me
in the deep end
Pre
Chorus
Let me know what you think. Has it been done too many times??? Should I dump it??