I Didn’t Cry Last Night

I am hoping to pitch this song.
Please critiques.

Listen here:
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I Didn’t Cry Last Night

© 2000 Irwin Byron Abrigo


(V1)
I was the fool
you broke all the rule
playing games that lovers do
Never caring
bout my feelings
nights alone I sit and cried
Asking myself why
all I ask is that you love me too
But last night I told myself
I ain't crying no more
I stood up strong, cause I realize
I’ve got to survive


(Chorus)
And I didn't last night
I'm not complaining
I didn't cry last night
all that you've put me though
I’m not hurting anymore
I made it through the storm
and Now there's a calm
cause I'm not crying no more


(V2)
Knowing its wrong
still you went along
Breaking each and every vow
I was thinking about our marriage
I do believe in love
even though for it hurts
I give you my all
Why can’t you give it too
I use to cry every and every night I did
On my pillow I’d cried
a river like the Nile


(Chorus)
And I didn't last night
I'm not complaining
I didn't cry last night
all that you've put me though
I’m not hurting anymore
I made it through the storm
and Now there's a calm
cause I'm not crying no more
 
Take this however you want.

my complete honest opinion.

i didnt really like it. its too dixie chicks. i dont know if thats what youre going for. it just really doesnt work for me as a song sung by a man, and some of the lyrics make me think that you intended it to be sung by a man.

thats just my humble opinion.

Adam
 
I think its well written and sounds great.

I agree with marshall, if sung by the right person it could work, but I don't think guys cry on their pillow like the river nile...and if they do they don't write about it.
 
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