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    I Didnít Cry Last Night

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    I am hoping to pitch this song.
    Please critiques.

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    I Didnít Cry Last Night

    © 2000 Irwin Byron Abrigo


    (V1)
    I was the fool
    you broke all the rule
    playing games that lovers do
    Never caring
    bout my feelings
    nights alone I sit and cried
    Asking myself why
    all I ask is that you love me too
    But last night I told myself
    I ain't crying no more
    I stood up strong, cause I realize
    Iíve got to survive


    (Chorus)
    And I didn't last night
    I'm not complaining
    I didn't cry last night
    all that you've put me though
    Iím not hurting anymore
    I made it through the storm
    and Now there's a calm
    cause I'm not crying no more


    (V2)
    Knowing its wrong
    still you went along
    Breaking each and every vow
    I was thinking about our marriage
    I do believe in love
    even though for it hurts
    I give you my all
    Why canít you give it too
    I use to cry every and every night I did
    On my pillow Iíd cried
    a river like the Nile


    (Chorus)
    And I didn't last night
    I'm not complaining
    I didn't cry last night
    all that you've put me though
    Iím not hurting anymore
    I made it through the storm
    and Now there's a calm
    cause I'm not crying no more

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    Take this however you want.

    my complete honest opinion.

    i didnt really like it. its too dixie chicks. i dont know if thats what youre going for. it just really doesnt work for me as a song sung by a man, and some of the lyrics make me think that you intended it to be sung by a man.

    thats just my humble opinion.

    Adam
    Got a man of the people, says keep hope alive
    Got fuel to burn, got roads to drive.


    Marshall Arts Recording

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    I think its well written and sounds great.

    I agree with marshall, if sung by the right person it could work, but I don't think guys cry on their pillow like the river nile...and if they do they don't write about it.
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