Hopeing for feedback

Sentridoh

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I was just hopeing for some friendly feedback on my lyrics.

All these thoughts in my head
Things I should have said
Things I kept to my self

All these painted scenes
pulling my heart strings
and things addicted to me


I don't really know where you fit into this
My red eyed dream


And with these words hard on the floor
now that you know more
Will you still stick around


I'm not really sure what part you play
In my red eyed dream
 
Yeah, sure, there's just no right or wrong, you know what I mean? Is there anymore you wanna add to it or is it done?
 
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