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Thread: COLLABORATIVE LYRIC-WRITING ACROSS THE WEB

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    This came out of Stiggy Dazrdust's post, called "Idea".

    I challenge you/us to contribute a line, with this approximate rhythm/metre:

    "Don't buy a house in Leighton Buzzard"

    After a few days, we try and hang 'em together and let the tunesmiths and V-band people have a go.

    Here's my effort:

    "Overcast and threatening rain"

    (You can tell I'm from the UK)

    Come on - give it a go!

    Delso

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    Last night we had a barbeque party at 3:00 in the morning. Here is my tribute...

    "Overcast and threatening rain"...
    Stomach wrenched in searing pain...
    Ate too much steak last night I fear...
    Looks like its time to get more beer...

    "Don't buy a house in Leighton Buzzard"...
    You might get me as your neighbor's...
    You'd hate my late night barbeques...
    Unless you like to party too...

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    Thanks.

    There was a hit about three-four years ago, which went: "Things Can Only Get Better!"

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    And they have.

    Thanks, Emeric and drstawl for posting over on the "Idea" thread.

    Can we try to avoid the end-rhyme - just stick to the metre/meter?

    Go, wordsmiths!

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    Oh my. After how quite a few of us have admitted that we suck at lyric writing, you want some lines from us? This should be fun.

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    I think to deep to feel the pain.

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    "She took some other guy's dick and stabbed it through your heart."

    Oh wait, it doesn't fit the meter. Never mind.


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    Nah, I can't take credit for it. I just heard it while one drunk friend was giving advice to another drunk friend.

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    Nice one, Ron. It's got a real triplet feel. Hope it's not autobiographical!

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    Overcast and threatening rain.
    Tapping ass is the name of the game.

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