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    Song in progress

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    I'm close in the lyric. Trying to come up with a good melody:

    "He gave up Heaven for me

    When I'm feeling weary
    From trials I face each day
    And I think on what I've given up
    As I walk this Christian way.
    I'm reminded yet again
    Just what Jesus left behind
    When he left that holy place
    to bear the sins of all mankind

    He walked away from walls of jasper
    Away from streets of gold.
    To be born into a fallen world
    Full of dusty rocky roads
    Apart from God in all his glory
    The spotless lamb of Calvery.
    Bore the trials and tribulations
    He gave up Heaven for me.

    (Chorus)
    He left a throne in glory,
    Placed at His father's side.
    To hang upon my cross,
    Where he suffered, bled, and died.
    With love beyond all measure
    God became humanity.
    When the King came down to earth
    He gave up Heaven for me.

    Mocked, scorned and laughed at,
    A crown of thorns upon his head
    Scourged till blood was flowing
    That formed a coat of crimson red.
    With his stripes he has healed us
    By his blood I've been set free!
    Glory Glory Hallelujah!
    He gave up Heaven for me.

    (Chorus)
    He left a throne in glory,
    Placed at His father's side.
    To hang upon my cross,
    Where he suffered, bled, and died.
    With love beyond all measure
    God became humanity.
    When my King came down to earth
    And gave up Heaven for me"
    I was country before they took the O out.

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    I really like your lyrics Mr stone!

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    Quote Originally Posted by einstein magoo View Post
    I really like your lyrics Mr stone!
    Thanks bro.
    I have revised the lyric a little bit:


    When I'm feeling weary
    From trials I face each day
    And I think of things I've sacrificed
    As I walk this Christian way.
    Once again I'm reminded
    Just what Jesus left behind
    When he left that holy place
    to bear the sins of all mankind

    He walked away from walls of jasper
    He left the shining streets of gold.
    To be born into a fallen world
    Full of dusty rocky roads
    Apart from God in all his glory
    The spotless lamb of Calvery.
    Bore trial and tribulation
    And gave up Heaven for me.

    (Chorus)
    He left a throne in heaven,
    There at His father's side.
    To hang upon my cross,
    Where he suffered, bled, and died.
    With love beyond all measure
    God became humanity.
    When the King came down from glory
    He gave up Heaven for me.

    Mocked, scorned and laughed at,
    A crown of thorns upon his head
    Scourged till blood was flowing
    That formed a coat of crimson red.
    With his stripes he has healed us
    By his blood I've been set free!
    Who am I that He would
    Give up Heaven for me?

    (Chorus)
    He left a throne in heaven,
    There at His father's side.
    To hang upon my cross,
    Where he suffered, bled, and died.
    With love beyond all measure
    God became humanity.
    When the King came down from glory
    He gave up Heaven for me.
    I was country before they took the O out.

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    Very powerful words.

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