Song in progress...

mjr

ADD -- blessing and curse
Thoughts so far??

Sweet Hellos
© 2007 Monte Richardson

V1:
Five days a week I head to work,
red lights and brake lights in my way
I want to get the day started so I can get it done
and head back home to the ones I love

Ch:
And when I get there, and I walk through the door
and see the two smiling faces I work hard for
no matter how my day went I know
There are Sweet Hellos when I get home
 
You have got a couple of choices here – V2 could continue to talk about what keeps you away from the ‘Sweet Hellos’ then you could use a bridge/mid8 to reflect on how life enhancing the ‘Sweet Hellos’ are. Or you could use V2 to talk about engaging with the home environment and use mid8 to reflect on what it would be like without them and end it with a ‘thank god’ (or Buddha) for the ‘sweet hello’ that save me/give life meaning etc.

I posted a song a while back Butterflies, about my 2 daughters so I get the vibe very strongly and I like the tag line as well.
 
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