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    please review this song

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    it's been a couple of years since i recorded it, so i've got my own critique about it, but i'm interested in hearing what others would have to say about it. Be honest.

    Baby I Saw You

    i'm glad i didn't have to alter the lyrics for the male singer.

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    i love the music to that song!
    it seems like his voice is a little overpowering, and it could use a little more depth.

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    The main intro lick and melody line sound a lot like an old song called "I Will Follow Him". The original might be hard to find but you can hear it on Whoopie Goldberg's Movie "Sister Act".

    Besides that it's a good song, but a bit repetitive melody wise.

    The recording/mix is good, and singer has good voice also.


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    awesome electric man!! maybe bring it down a bit or bring up the rhythm. great tone!
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    Man, whyd you give me negative rep? I liked that song! not very cool of you.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Nicole_Rose
    it's been a couple of years since i recorded it, so i've got my own critique about it, but i'm interested in hearing what others would have to say about it. Be honest.

    Baby I Saw You

    i'm glad i didn't have to alter the lyrics for the male singer.
    I got a blue chicklet too - but it might be because Nicole_Rose has no rep power yet. I think if you have no rep power you give a blue chicklet - for good or bad rep - no impact either way. Nicole_Rose - please sign your rep - makes it easier to determine who's sending it.

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    thanks for the comments folks. i appreciate them.


    i added to rep, i didn't remove any. but sorry if my adding to it lowered your rep.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ido1957
    The main intro lick and melody line sound a lot like an old song called "I Will Follow Him". The original might be hard to find but you can hear it on Whoopie Goldberg's Movie "Sister Act".

    Besides that it's a good song, but a bit repetitive melody wise.

    The recording/mix is good, and singer has good voice also.


    i wasn't aware that there was anything out there like it. i'll have to have a listen and see how close it is.
    and you're right. the melody is simple, a bit catchy but simple and repetitive.

    thanks
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    Quote Originally Posted by luckicharm
    i love the music to that song!
    it seems like his voice is a little overpowering, and it could use a little more depth.
    yeah his vocals are a bit much i agree.

    i'm glad you liked it

    thanks
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    Quote Originally Posted by TelePaul
    awesome electric man!! maybe bring it down a bit or bring up the rhythm. great tone!
    thanks. that's what i play. i was playing a crappy guitar with a dead feel to it but something nice came out anyway.

    and yeah, the rhythm needs to come up a little and the lead down a little. (along with the lead vocals.)

    i'm glad you liked it.

    thanks
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