Feedback request. Original song.

[Robus]

Edit. Thanks for the response easlern.

 

[easlern]

Sounds solid, for some reason I imagine Toby Keith doing it. Maybe the end of the chorus sticks out to me though, seems like it could use a more memorable line, maybe "running out on the tab again" or something? I picture like this bonnie and clyde couple fleeing to mexico. . .

 

[andrushkiwt]

try the "mixing clinic" instead.

 

[Robus]

Thanks. I was more looking for critique of the composition than mix. Oh well.