can you check out my beat?

[DJFILLAinclined]

i am a beginer and wish for you to judge my song. some tips and hints would be appreciated. play in LOW QUALITY. it only works with that now.

http://www.soundclick.com/updateband/SongInfo.cfm?BandID=141611&Updated=954164

 

[Toki987]

You need to post this in the MP3 clinic. You`ll get more responses to it in there.

 

[Massive Master]

And your link is screwed up...

 

[SPINSTERWUN]

DJFILLAinclined, put it in the MP3 Clinic!!!!!!!!!!!