Hey guys!
I wrote this instrumental for the wife to give to her on our anniversary and I'm working on some new stuff of a similar style (but a little faster and heavier probably) and was wondering if you guys could make any suggestions on how I can make the song sound better overall. Did I drop the ball somewhere? Should I have cleaned certain parts up in some way? Could I have added or removed something to add something else to the song?
The song is called 'First Summer' named after what I remember my first summer with her being like. Ignore it being called a rough, it's not a rough at this point.
https://soundcloud.com/user-66230428/first-summer-rough-3
I wrote this instrumental for the wife to give to her on our anniversary and I'm working on some new stuff of a similar style (but a little faster and heavier probably) and was wondering if you guys could make any suggestions on how I can make the song sound better overall. Did I drop the ball somewhere? Should I have cleaned certain parts up in some way? Could I have added or removed something to add something else to the song?
The song is called 'First Summer' named after what I remember my first summer with her being like. Ignore it being called a rough, it's not a rough at this point.
https://soundcloud.com/user-66230428/first-summer-rough-3