I like it! Reminds me a bit of Alice Cooper in places.
I, like Ray think the hot sound suites the song. There are places where the loud guitar & drums don't mesh right imo. On the loud guitar parts the tone gets a little airy to me. Not shrill or anything but almost breathy. Could just be me.
I personally would fade the end out a bit instead of the click off.
Very cool song!
F.S.