We'll Raise Happy Children

[Irwin abrigo]

This is my second post if this song (see my first post below) I've done some editing to the melody I hope sound better to you guys (for it sounds good to me). Glad to hear your thoughts.

We'll Raise Happy Children 2 by irwin abrigo | Free Listening on SoundCloud

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Have you ever had a good friendship with the opposite sex who you'd fall in love with after? Well this song it is just about that. I have a demo now so, I kindly ask for your feedback .

We'll Raise Happy Children by irwin abrigo | Free Listening on SoundCloud


We’ll Raise Happy Children

©2018 Irwin Abrigo

(Verse One)

We started out as friends, we didn’t know each other well

But we keep our friendship going on

We laugh about the way, the way things ought to be today

Was no secret, we’re in love



(Lift)

You didn’t see it in me,

I didn’t see it in you

Now we’re more than friends, with a love so truth

I want to marry you, and pretty soon



(Chorus)

We will be parents, because we are happy friends

We’ll raise happy children

Because we are happy friends

We’ll raise happy children



(Verse Two)

Now you can have my heart, I didn’t right from the start

Our friendship would have been something else

You could me by surprise I had the same thing on my mind

The right words I could not find



(Lift)

You didn’t see it in me

I didn’t see it in you

Now we’re more than friends, with a love so truth

I want to marry you, and pretty soon



(Chorus)

We will be parents, and because we are happy friends

We’ll raise happy children

Because we are happy friends

We’ll raise happy children



(Bridge)

Happy couples, make happy families

Happy families, make happy homes

And I Know

Yes I know



(Out)

Because we are happy friends

We’ll raise happy children

Because we are happy friends

We’ll raise happy children

 

[jimistone]

The synth bass and drums that kick off the song song sound pretty good. The keys that come in later are a bit sloppy on timing with some bad notes.

I would try to get that tighter before trying to mix if this was my tune.

 

[Irwin abrigo]

Hi TimisTone,

Thanks for listening to my song. I've done some editing to the melody so, I post it below when you have the time Please have a listen.

We'll Raise Happy Children 2 by irwin abrigo | Free Listening on SoundCloud