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    "Waterfall" New original tune by me

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    I wrote and recorded this song. It is dedicated to my friend who had a skate board accident and has been in a coma for a year. The acapella part is supposed to have a piano but i dont play too well and need my friend to come over and record it.

    All comments appreciated !


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    First thing that jumps out to me is the timing. The rhythm is not tight. The bass, drums, and acoustic guitar are all a little off during the verse. In the chorus things get better.

    Acoustic guitar is a little harsh and maybe over compressed at the beginning. Try to EQ out something around 2k maybe. It will also help the vocals sit better.

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    Thanks! I will do that right now and post a reply.
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    The song is pretty good and I applaud the effort, but it needs work.
    Most of the way things are EQ'd sound pretty awkward, theres alot of masking and clutter in the mix.
    As was mentioned there are a few places the timing is too far off to be passable, same with the vocal pitch.

    You can learn how to improve all those things hangin around the forum and asking questions. Good Luck and thanks for sharing your work!

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    Played around with it today. Still need to re record some parts, but i changed some stuff around.

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