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    I just recorded a vocal track and after extensive editing, this is what i came up with. Please review or edit if u feel the need or think u could do better, but either way, let me know what u think. Thanks!


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    Train As You Fight, Fight As You Train.

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    Uh, dude, this is silly.

    Without music it's pretty pointless. I will say that standing alone these vocals really suck. No real intrest or tone, slurred and not enunciated. Monotone and bland. The writing is pale without accompaniment

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    I'm with Jake on this one...

    Let us hear the rest of the tune so we know how it fits in context. Its pretty much impossible to tell if the edits are any good when we don't know what had to be edited (in context with the music).

    The track is fairly clean (on headphones), but it seems like there was too much distance between the vocalist and the mic... seems too open and roomy sounding. Also seems to not be very consistent in volume.

    Just my $0.02 worth for having not heard the rest of the backing tracks.

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    Yeah post the whole tune and I will monitor it and give it a feedback. Right now it's pointless.
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    What was the extensive editing you did? Vocals are pretty dull. Where is the Music? What is this? Help!!!!!!!!!

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    You ok dude? WTF is this?

    At lease you could have done it all together. I mean 2 min. of blah blah blah...PAUSE...blah blah blah...EVEN LONGER PAUSE...blah blah blah.

    Well...Umm...I'm hopped up on pain killers and still this is lame.
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    but how do I give my vocals more spirit, I've tried everything.when I talk I don't have much spirit or ooohmph in my voice, is there any hope 4 me.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Rock Star 87
    but how do I give my vocals more spirit, I've tried everything.when I talk I don't have much spirit or ooohmph in my voice, is there any hope 4 me.
    Ok. Obviously you are not getting this. We cannot give you an objective view of anything unless we can hear it in context with the music. To make it simple: POST THE DAMNED THING WITH THE MUSIC INCLUDED!

    You DO have music to go with this don't you?
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    I like the tempo but I don't like the beat. I give it a 6, Dick...

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