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    With You Tonight.

    I got some help from some good friends and added some guitar parts, real drums, and congas.

    Did I overdo it?
    Instead of a Do Not Disturb Sign, I need one that says "Already Disturbed. Proceed With Caution".

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    Sounds pretty good....bass is a little thick sounding on the bottom end....could use a bit more upper end for some snap. I think it's hiding the kick a bit. Other than that, the rest is sounding pretty decent...I think it's coming along well. Maybe roll a little of the very lows off the bass, and see if that clears it up some more.
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    Love the snappy little leads you put in there - sounds like a Strat?
    The vocals are doubled aren't they on the verses? Sounds like it and done well. The harmonies are tight. The accoustics could be a bit more in sync, they tend to fight each other for the rhythm - listening on headphones.
    I'm in agreement with Dogman - maybe a tad less bottom on this. The vocals might need a touch of highs too....maybe after rolling off the bass you can determine that better. The song song has a nice familiar ring to it but is unique at the same time. Smooth and well arranged...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dogman View Post
    Sounds pretty good....bass is a little thick sounding on the bottom end....could use a bit more upper end for some snap. I think it's hiding the kick a bit. Other than that, the rest is sounding pretty decent...I think it's coming along well. Maybe roll a little of the very lows off the bass, and see if that clears it up some more.
    Funny, I just boosted the levels on the bass because I thought that I smothered it.... Guess it's just my crappy monitoring chain. I will have to put a high pass filter on it. It's not eq'd...
    Quote Originally Posted by ido1957 View Post
    Love the snappy little leads you put in there - sounds like a Strat?
    The vocals are doubled aren't they on the verses? Sounds like it and done well. The harmonies are tight. The accoustics could be a bit more in sync, they tend to fight each other for the rhythm - listening on headphones.
    I'm in agreement with Dogman - maybe a tad less bottom on this. The vocals might need a touch of highs too....maybe after rolling off the bass you can determine that better. The song song has a nice familiar ring to it but is unique at the same time. Smooth and well arranged...
    I am playing two separate parts on the acoustics. One is straight strumming, the other is picking arpeggiated chords. Maybe I can do something about it.
    As far as the snappy leads, that's Anfontan, not me. You would have to ask him what he did.

    Thanks for the listen! I may not get a chance to post a remix.
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    Quote Originally Posted by ido1957 View Post
    The vocals are doubled aren't they on the verses? Sounds like it and done well. The harmonies are tight.
    The song song has a nice familiar ring to it but is unique at the same time. Smooth and well arranged...
    These are things that I never thought I'd hear anyone say about my music. I must be learning something here...
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