Uncle Junior (electronic)

Generally the sounds are nice. Synths, guitars, etc. All sounds OK.

The melody lines are a little lacking. There is some lead-ish stuff going on every once in a while. But the song needs a direction or purpose. It sounds almost like a jam - at least for a lot of it.
 
Hi Nick. Is this going to be an instrumental? It deserves lyrics and a vocal IMO. You have at least three sections there for a verse, chorus and bridge.

Some of thr patches sound a little cheesy, esp. the ones at the end. The lead synth might be okay when you fold it into a full mix.

Sounds good so far. Keep at it.
 
It's got an 80's type vibe to it, a bit Visage-like. I like the stereo delays on the intro keyboard. It's a pretty good composition but I agree with Robus it needs a vocal to take it to the next level
 
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