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    Hey all, been working on this tune for a while now. Not sure what but something feels like it's missing yet. Wondering how other people feel about it.

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    Generally the sounds are nice. Synths, guitars, etc. All sounds OK.

    The melody lines are a little lacking. There is some lead-ish stuff going on every once in a while. But the song needs a direction or purpose. It sounds almost like a jam - at least for a lot of it.

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    Hi Nick. Is this going to be an instrumental? It deserves lyrics and a vocal IMO. You have at least three sections there for a verse, chorus and bridge.

    Some of thr patches sound a little cheesy, esp. the ones at the end. The lead synth might be okay when you fold it into a full mix.

    Sounds good so far. Keep at it.

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    It's got an 80's type vibe to it, a bit Visage-like. I like the stereo delays on the intro keyboard. It's a pretty good composition but I agree with Robus it needs a vocal to take it to the next level

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    Thanks guys for your insights!

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