Same here.. that bass synth stuff seems a bit loud.. I like some of these sounds and the general feel of this tune..
Maybe got a little repetitive, but I did like the tune.. 5 minutes seems like a long time for a song like this.. It might have more impact if it was a bit shorter maybe.. cool song!
Pretty cool songwriting, man... Some performance issues... or maybe it's just the quantization? Certain notes seem out of time... Nice sounds; wish I could think/perform this creatively w/my synth
I'd like something other than the AM Radio vox thru-out--maybe use it in every OTHER verse, and go somewhere else with another effect the other times...
4 out of 5 -- and I didn't even survey any dentists
(uh.... forgive me, younger ones, if that reference goes over anyone's head )