Space and Time - Song with AIC/Jar of Flies vibe

[jonlint]

Hi all,

This is a song I wrote about 2 years ago with an Alice In Chains / Jar Of Flies vibe. I painstakingly retracked all guitars to this song and did a remix. Feedback most welcome:
Space And Time by Jonathan Linton 4 | Free Listening on SoundCloud

SPACE AND TIME
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)

I wish I could have met you
In a diff’rent space and time
Fate intervened
The planets didn’t align
Metaphysical union
In a different paradigm
Opportunity’s window
Expired access time

Point of singularity, has past its prime
Could’ve been so different
In different place
A diff’rent space and time
Diff’rent space and time

Sometimes my mind time, travels
To a diff’rent space and time
Imprisoned words
Freed to the sublime
Though apart I feel that
In a different paradigm
Unspoken words remain
Frozen in your mind

Point of singularity, has past its prime
Could’ve been so different
In different place
A diff’rent space and time
Diff’rent space and time

SOLO

Point of singularity, has past its prime
Could have been so different
If we retrace
That lost embrace
In different space and time…….

Different space and time
Different space and time

 

[Manslick]

this is great af
it holds up at any volume level
catchy af
guitars in the middle YES af
samba-like

 

[jonlint]

Thanks of the feedback and compliments, Manslick!

 

[frank1985]

Musically vanilla, but sonically v. good

 

[Big Thier]

It does sound good. I'd say too much reverb on the snare, but I haven't heard the original.

 

[sideSister]

It does sound good. I'd say too much reverb on the snare, but I haven't heard the original.

I agree about the reverb on the snare. Maybe a tad much overall; listen to the toms and the acoustic guitar leads at 1:35.

But well recorded and good listening. I really enjoyed it.