sorry if this a double post..

[turtlishous]

haven't been recording much so i haven't been around these parts, but i was recently inspired.....let me know what you think.

Also...if anyone would like to try some vox, PLEASE be my geust!

bonny

thanks for the listen.

 

[Llarion]

haven't been recording much so i haven't been around these parts, but i was recently inspired.....let me know what you think.

Also...if anyone would like to try some vox, PLEASE be my geust!

bonny

thanks for the listen.

Well, the obvious first; needs real drums to kick harder... But, since you don't probably have that available, try a different snare that has a lot more "pop". The primary guitar distortion is a smidge over the top. Well, OK, more than a smidge, but that's subjective. The playing is fine, no its; your rhythm is good; lead needs to be higher in the mix; don't be 'fraid...

Good start!

P.S. - Never got to thank you for cruisin by my website...

 

[turtlishous]

thanks alot for the crits!

all i have for drums is a ten+ year old casio keyboard.....i'll try to use a drum replacer to fix the snare.

the "lead" guitar is pretty shotty and needs to be redone...so after that i can bring it in some more.