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    Hi peeps

    Long time, no chat.

    I'm doing the shameful thing of not hanging around here much and then dropping a new song in the clinic and expecting everyone to listen to it...

    Still, some of you might be interested.

    Sore Winner - The Honey Hunters

    Any and all feedback welcome.

    Cheers

    Lyrics:

    Sore Winner

    You have my head upon a stick
    The game is yours, you’ve won the trick
    You have defeated me for sure
    Still…
    Apparently it’s not enough
    You moan on and huff and puff
    Big bad wolf back at my door
    You know…

    Nobody likes a sore winner
    Nobody likes a sore winner
    Nobody likes a sore winner babe

    Your every box has now been ticked
    Your mortal enemy is licked
    My humiliation’s done
    It is...
    But you’re wanting to complain
    About the nature of my pain
    Still you have to point the gun
    You know...

    Nobody likes a sore winner
    Nobody likes a sore winner
    Nobody likes a sore winner babe
    Nobody likes a sore winner
    You think you’re a boss but you’re just a beginner
    Nobody likes a sore winner babe

    And I contemplate defeat
    I strategically retreat
    Why must you go on?

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    Short song for you. What gives?? Also missing that signature Armistice guitar tone.

    Everything sounds good and really no need to make changes. Personally, I always say bring the drums up a bit. I think that's one of those things you and I never agreed upon, but that's cool.

    Lyrics in the chorus could use a rewrite. Comes across as a bit lazy with the repeating line.

    Hope all is well for you.

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    Armi!

    Cool tune man!

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    Cool guitar riff. Bass is too loud. Drums and vocals should come up. The timing of the bass sounds off in places. I think you're rushing.

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    I like it. Chorus reminds me of Ian Anderson for some reason. All sounds clear and above board here

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    Quote Originally Posted by jimmys69 View Post
    Armi!

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    Hey Jimmy. Long time... Thanks dude.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chili View Post
    Short song for you. What gives?? Also missing that signature Armistice guitar tone.

    Everything sounds good and really no need to make changes. Personally, I always say bring the drums up a bit. I think that's one of those things you and I never agreed upon, but that's cool.

    Lyrics in the chorus could use a rewrite. Comes across as a bit lazy with the repeating line.

    Hope all is well for you.
    Short alright. I bought a Tele and it's sort of sent me in changed direction. Thanks for the listen.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Robus View Post
    Cool guitar riff. Bass is too loud. Drums and vocals should come up. The timing of the bass sounds off in places. I think you're rushing.
    Not dragging? Thanks for the feedback. I'll look into the bass timing and other bits. Cheers.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bulls Hit View Post
    I like it. Chorus reminds me of Ian Anderson for some reason. All sounds clear and above board here
    Thanks Bulls.

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    The second note of the verse bass riff rings out very loudly. Guitars sound good, and I like the intro a lot.
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    Quote Originally Posted by andrushkiwt View Post
    The second note of the verse bass riff rings out very loudly. Guitars sound good, and I like the intro a lot.
    Thanks andrush - I went looking for the bass note issue and didn't find it, either audibly or visually - second note is the same volume as the one before and one after, so far as I can hear. I'll ask someone else specifically about it and see what they say.

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