A song
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Nice song. Nice guitars. Nice panning ideas on the clean electrics.
Singing was pretty good. The distorted guit at 3:18 is a bit far back. Nice part though.
A big jump in volume when the chorus hits. The separation and definition falls apart a bit during the chorus.
Double tracked lead vox might sound nice on this one.
Trip...
Singing was pretty good. The distorted guit at 3:18 is a bit far back. Nice part though.
A big jump in volume when the chorus hits. The separation and definition falls apart a bit during the chorus.
Double tracked lead vox might sound nice on this one.
Trip...
FattMusiek
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This was great, the drums sound pretty good. Acoustics are very clear and the singing was pretty good.
terrible_buddhi
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during the chorus the snare seems to stick out a bit much. for the verses the guitar seems (to me) to be trampling on the vox a bit and the drums are too far back. I would pan the toms in a bit more mono too.
Like the sublty of the electric guitar in the background.
Like the sublty of the electric guitar in the background.
SLuiCe
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Riku, I really dig the music. The recording is nice too, especially the percussion.
I think the drums may be mixed a bit up front. Those toms especially jump out and punch me in the nose. I like the sound of the ride and the level it's at. Just enough for ambience.
Could use a little more of those leads.
Hmmm...the bass seems inconsistant. It seems to drop out of the mix here and there, especially during the chorus.
Good tune...good vibe. Gather up the clinic tips then go back to work on the mix. Lots of potential!
I think the drums may be mixed a bit up front. Those toms especially jump out and punch me in the nose. I like the sound of the ride and the level it's at. Just enough for ambience.
Could use a little more of those leads.
Hmmm...the bass seems inconsistant. It seems to drop out of the mix here and there, especially during the chorus.
Good tune...good vibe. Gather up the clinic tips then go back to work on the mix. Lots of potential!
some really cool stuff going on here
seems to me though, that there are like three intros
one from 0 to 32, a second from 32 to 52, and the third from 52 to the first verse
granted, they all sound very good, but my suggestion would be to work on your arrangement here
maybe eliminate one or two, or work on the transitions
some really clean stuff though
enjoyed
seems to me though, that there are like three intros
one from 0 to 32, a second from 32 to 52, and the third from 52 to the first verse
granted, they all sound very good, but my suggestion would be to work on your arrangement here
maybe eliminate one or two, or work on the transitions
some really clean stuff though
enjoyed
Hi guys and thanks for your reply
HevyD47Ca, TripleM, FattMusiek, terrible_buddhi, SLuiCe, elephant...
Thanks a lot... I was quite sure the song would suck, big time. I think the main problem is that the song is lacking some intensivity (It's a lot better when played live) I'm playing the acoustic and singing and also responsible of those three intros
Thanks for the tips... I'll try to remix it in the future...
Riku
HevyD47Ca, TripleM, FattMusiek, terrible_buddhi, SLuiCe, elephant...
Thanks a lot... I was quite sure the song would suck, big time. I think the main problem is that the song is lacking some intensivity (It's a lot better when played live) I'm playing the acoustic and singing and also responsible of those three intros
Thanks for the tips... I'll try to remix it in the future...
Riku