Hey, the Australian mp3.com is cool, a bit different, a bit looser, more relaxed, but the download went smoothly.
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plenty of volume on this track, .... and so we dance ... at 0:40, pleasant sounding melodic instrument, the raspy thing coming in now ... I would look for some more subtle panning issues here, perhaps clone some tracks and run them 4%R and 4%L just to create a larger stereo field, and I hear the softer things on the edges ... soft things on the edges you can move about ever so slightly within a 3-5% area, makes it more floaty mon ... but don't abuse that.
2:22 ... this build up, you can pan from a wider stance into the middle, and this is very, very effective ... you can start wide and pan us into the middle as the buildup occurs, but not all the way into the middle, keep us hanging a bit.
By 3:00 ... everything has been happening in the middle, and I like what you are doing ... batman at 3:20 ... superheroes !
You could make some money writing for video games, and be a professional soundcrafter ...
Ahhhh ... I'm in a TRANCE ... yes ... that's what it's about ...
At 4:15, smooth mix, nothing leaping out and saying 'that's wrong' or 'no don't do that there' ... mix is good ... by 4:47, I would modify the space invader thing, with panning, or EQ ... just something to give us a change ... When repeating the same sound for longer periods of time, change it gently and subtly with EQ, or manipulate the verb, or something
5:21 ... cool
Thanks for the nifty piece of music.