Simple Twist of Fate - 30 Second Clip

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oneguy

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Hey Y'all!

It has been away since I last posted.

I've still been playing around with stuff and learning things.

Let me know what you think of my latest clip.

Thanks in advance!



Oneguy
 
is there any bass?

Guitar sounds thin and boring, the tone could use a little chime, or be just on the verge of breaking up.

Drums are simple and could work.

Biggest thing for me is lack of bass, and out of pitch vocals. I think being honest is the best way to get better. Keep plugging away and your recordings and performance will get better and better.
 
I appreciate the honest feedback. Actually after listening to it a few more times I think there was something going on with my electric guitar.

I decided to do an acoustic one instead. Please let me know your comments on this newer one and ignore the above clip.

Thanks!

It's in the post below.
 
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