Same Old Thing - Blues/Grunge Song

jonlint

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Hi all,

Wrote a blues/grunge song this weekend. Feedback most welcome:

Same Old Thing V2 by Jonathan Linton 4 | Free Listening on SoundCloud

SAME OLD THING
(Words by Jonathan Linton, Music by Jonathan Linton)
Every time
The same old story
You promise
Better things
Fresh ideas
And fresh money
The fat lady
Starts to sing

When did it change
Or was it a soul exchange
All that I know, is
The more things change
It’s same old thing

Every time
The same old story
You promise
Better things
Fresh ideas
And fresh money
The fat lady
Starts to sing

I’m so tired
Of your fumblin’
It bites like
A bee sting
Solution
To the problem
Get rid of everything
 
On headphones I had to turn it down, but then I'm old enough to remember Deep Purple. Vocals are great, good energy on everything. Excellent all round jam
 
First thing I noticed was it's a bit too bright. Did you boost the top end on the master channel? Just about everything is harsh up top - cymbals, guitars, vox....
 
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