I dont remember hearing this tune before, might have missed a previous version. Reading the replies in the thread, looks like some major changes have taken place. To me it sounds great. If I were to offer up any suggestions, the only one I have is the piano in the intro sounds a little too quantized. Not sure if it's midi or live playing.
I say this because when I record piano, I play it live, but record the midi data as well. I then go back and edit out the flubs and rerecord. However, I avoid any quantizing because I don't want to lose the live feel. I'm curious if you do somethign similar. If it's live, then disregard my comments. If it's midi or midi recorded maybe look at how much quantizing is going on.
Thanks for sharing!!