Punk Rock EP/Demo...

[kylosius]

Took me awhile but I finally finished recording my own stuff. Please check it out and let me know. I did everything but the drums on this and I feel it turned out pretty damn good. They're still not mastered at the moment but any extra input would be great.

www.myspace.com/outsidewaiting
or
www.purevolume.com/outsidewaiting

 

[DavidK]

Good.

I could use the vocals a LOT louder, I can barely hear them. Guitar and drums are fine, the mood is fine but CRANK the vox up

 

[rayc]

Hi kylosius,
Where Has Everyone...Very Green Day I'd say -. Yep, vocals need volume & clarity. There are some pitch probs with the vocals too.
Where is the bass drum? The kit seems very 1D.
THe bass guitar needs the same as your vocals.
The guitar tag line sticks out well except it's not original.
This is a good demo - time to sit down & rework things though to make the songs shine with some dynamics and serious playing - did I notice a little tempo prob at one point?
Good so far kylosius - now back to work. If you want to send something off for mastering make it your best work.
Cheers
rayC