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Hello,

I just finalized a track and I would like to ask you for your feedback. Even if most of the instruments in the track are electronic the basic idea is to have some handmade elements as well. Therefore I recorded some percussion elements. Now I would like to ask you for your feedback regarding

1. Mix (transparancy, vocals, bass-area)
2. Arrangement
3. The song itself

I have two versions in place:

Version 1:
https://soundcloud.com/500-khz/you-never

Version 2:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/ugpuayt4hu40hfz/You Never New.wav?dl=0

Thanks in advance!

peter
 
there's no reverb, way too dry, the other thing is I can't hear a solid bass drum, the arrangement could be improved by adding strings at 1:04, and at 0:50 in the breakdown section, I'd have that as a brass arrangement instead of organ, to help keep it interesting.
 
I think mix 2 is much better. Mix one had a low end that's out of control and quite a few other problems.

I like mix 2. The bass instrument is still a little rumbly. I would roll off some low end.

However you mixed the vocal, it was much better in mix 2. It was brittle in mix 1. Some of the rhythm instruments get a little too busy in spots and take away from the singer.
 
Hi guys,

thank you for your feedback.

@Btyre2013
Actually there is a lot of reverb, but I agree sometimes it seems to be a bit dry. Your ideas regarding the arrangement are fantastic. Especially to put some brass in. The first step is to record an original Bass.

@TripleM
Thanks, I totally agree, the second mix is much better. I agree also with the rhythm instruments I have to tame them a little bit. They shouldn't be that prominent.

Anyways, thanks for the comments. Other comments are welcome....
 
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