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    Question plleeeaaaase give some constructive .....

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    First of all, forgive me, Ive already posted this, but it seems to have dissappeared into the quagmire somewhere along the line. Anyroad, no one wanted to sit through it, it would appear (and I dont blame you, its a bit lengthy) and i didnt get any feedback.

    This track has taken up 3 months of my life and Im at my wits end, I must have mixed it 30 times. My ears have disintergrated and my Arse is very very numb (er ..through sitting on it ...). My fingers are worn out and my eyballs have popped out. My Brain is no more.

    Thanks in hopeless anticipation.

    Andy

    a link would help ....

    www.deeexpus.com/sounds/PTtee Unmastered.mp3
    ".... the time will come to carry on, and the Red sky will abate ..."

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    Any link?
    Quote Originally Posted by walters View Post
    i'm not getting that Polish mastering sound why is that?

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    there now ^^, told you, my Brain's upped and left me .....
    ".... the time will come to carry on, and the Red sky will abate ..."

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    cool. has an 80's vibe.

    i thought the metronome was a little annoying. i was creating a rhythm in my head that built. you could probably make the metronome do what it does now, but make it sound like it morphs into a cool little rhythm via EQ automation and sampling/editing.

    oh man. when the drums and everything come in...so clean. drums are awesome (i don't deal with drums, so someone else might say differently).

    the guitar tone is nice.

    the lead vocal is great. there may be a slight brightness in it. not in the high highs 1.2kish range.

    but whatever. sounds pretty pro to me.

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    Definately get rid of the metronome. It is not needed and distacts from the very cool beginning. What are you using for the drums? On my pc speakers (which are quite good, Klipsch) the hi hats when closed are to loud in the soft passages in the beginning (first 5 minutes). But during jam section (middle) and after they sit fine. This is a really good tune. And for being 12 minutes keeps my interest. The hats may be just me, but the stick thing in the beginning and toward the end has to go. This is definately one of the best tunes Ive heard on here. What equipment are you using?

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    Off the cuff, my first impression is that the rhythm guitar had some delay, the vocals had a bit of reverb but the drums sounded completely dry. To me, it leaves the impression that the drums were recorded in an entirely different space than the other tracks, which can contribute to the impression that the recording lacks a certain amount of cohesion and consistency.

    I'm a bit short on time right now, so I'll have to revisit this a bit later.

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    Thumbs up Hello

    liked the track i Mastered it for you.

    i will post it back up for you soon, my upload is having Technical and emotional difficulties at the moment.

    i held back frequencies you don't want ( i read your mind in your sleep) and let the natural golden order of the song shine through.

    RMS is -13.654 average.

    that's a little hot for me but i thought you would be able to hear the aspects of your mix you have spent so long on.

    there were minimal dynamic issues and you will see that beautiful roll off on the edge of the wave, which tells you that more than a maximiser was implicated.

    i done a lot of small things that added up to a fair amount i could have pulled some frequencies more but it's late here and i have an appointment with the hermetic order of the golden dawn, tomorrow.

    Thatís a distortion of the truth.

    Sounds good.

    When I have a good listen Iíll give you some more constructive and environmentally friendly criticism.

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    Arrow on Re-listen

    is this song Christian Rock?

    Because as per my meeting requirements tomorrow Iím not meant to be listening to any Christian music for at least 24 hours before hand.......you know it's like when you can't eat before major surgery.

    ?

    how embarrassed will i be humming the tunes of some catchy Christian rock vibe at a Pagan Golden dawn order meeting in honour of the 33 Masonic Tribes.

    Whoís got egg on their FACE in that case!

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    I'm not surprised it took you 3 months...it's a 12 minute opus!

    Shades of the opening track on Dark Side of the Moon in your intro.

    Sounds well mixed...although I only made it to the 6 minute mark. Does sound 80's like the other guy said.
    I really...really...REALLY have no idea what I'm talking about...AT ALL.

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    Quote Originally Posted by theblackBay View Post
    is this song Christian Rock?

    Because as per my meeting requirements tomorrow Iím not meant to be listening to any Christian music for at least 24 hours before hand.......you know it's like when you can't eat before major surgery.

    ?

    how embarrassed will i be humming the tunes of some catchy Christian rock vibe at a Pagan Golden dawn order meeting in honour of the 33 Masonic Tribes.

    Whoís got egg on their FACE in that case!
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