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    Question Paranoia -feedback request

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    hey guys, would appreciate some feedback
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    Mix is pretty sparse, definitely has to have the video. I didn't hear anything that sounded bad. I did only listen on headphones as a reference.
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    Quote Originally Posted by DM60 View Post
    Mix is pretty sparse, definitely has to have the video. I didn't hear anything that sounded bad. I did only listen on headphones as a reference.


    when you say: "mix is sparse" you mean, bad mixing, or you talk about the song which could have more elements, or sound more characteristic? (or maybe both )

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    I liked it... I do think it I would like it more if the vocals were a lot cleaner (less effects) and a little louder. At one point I wanted to hear a dreamy screaming bending (if there is such a thing) guitar riff or short solo just for an emotional boost. All in all very good. I liked the sparce mix , meaning not a lot of instruments or over production. Enjoyed it .. mark

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    Quote Originally Posted by mark skinner View Post
    I liked it... I do think it I would like it more if the vocals were a lot cleaner (less effects) and a little louder. At one point I wanted to hear a dreamy screaming bending (if there is such a thing) guitar riff or short solo just for an emotional boost. All in all very good. I liked the sparce mix , meaning not a lot of instruments or over production. Enjoyed it .. mark
    thank you ! i think it might be a good idea, this emotional boost, i will definitely try it, i'm looking for improving some of my songs
    thank you :3

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mir View Post
    when you say: "mix is sparse" you mean, bad mixing, or you talk about the song which could have more elements, or sound more characteristic? (or maybe both )
    Mix was fine, just not a lot of elements, which works with the video as the video fills the void. I don't think it could stand on its own, but it does work very nicely with the video.
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    I’ve been listening to a lot of electronic music lately. I enjoyed the song and the video just made it more interesting.

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    I quite like the open and empty treatment for the music but I always cheat a bit on these things and turn the sound OFF, then watch the video first. I then get a mental impression of the things I'm going to hear. I got a totally different feel. The machinery going thump, crash, the quite violent feel to the edit, the up tempo feel of the cuts, then discovered a laid back chilled piece of music (which I like). Not sure on the match though?

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    I kind of enjoyed this. Because I listen to music like this. It has a really cool slow sex dance (Sputnik's Dancearama), but it lacks the sex. Honestly, with a piece like this, it's the most important part. It could just be me, but I couldn't understand a single word in the vocal.

    I enjoyed the video. But, I do have to say, you have that snare or wood block (whatever it is) and nothing was synced to hit in the video on that beat. You have those two pieces of steel smashing like fists and not one hits on it. It's also machinery, which is not sexy.

    While it might seem like I'm ripping your work apart. I'm not. There's a lot of good there. It's literally my type of song. As it is, if I heard it on a radio I would make it through without changing the channel. Which if you knew me, is a big thing.

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    Pretty creative! It would be interesting to hear another element that picks up the
    energy and intensity matching the quickening pace is the video. well done!

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