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    Oh For Christs Sake...

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    ....lol....ok ...new song kinda....

    "HEY JESUS"...

    http://www.nowhereradio.com/mynewhead/singles

    its a techno-rap like ..anti climactic sorta thing






    ok for reals tho....its a song anyway.
    jamal

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    Yea! cool style. The guitar is a little low in the one part but the harmony is got that Beatles style sound. Almost like that Magical Mystery era.

    Good one

    Joe

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    Serious tune. I like it....




    a lot.



    More later.

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    WOW! I really liked it! And not to worry...you can seek salvation without Sunday's pot luck buffet...what a great line!!! Although I don't know why you'd want to miss it. Marsha Addington makes the best cheese potatoes!! This song literally brought tears to my eyes. Really awesome man! Keep up the good work. I'm gonna check out your other tunes!
    [url=http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3232&alid=-1]Here are some of my tunes. Good for a laugh![/url]

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    great songwriting! vocals are very good. your vocals get better with every post.

    the mix has some issues but i wouldn't know how to fix them or even how to articulate them, others can do that much better. i just like the song.

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    How ironic

    that you post a song like this at the same time as me.

    Good song, good performance!

    Now for the mix critique:

    Vocals are too loud in a lot of spots, but not as a whole.

    Drums are thin and distant like they're in the next room or somethin'.

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    -too many low mids.

    -run a compressor over the vocal track.

    -the foo fighters just played on snl, and they fucking KILLED!

    -too many low mids

    -cool song

    -what the hell is an "orange alert" anyway. An orange doesn't scare me at all.

    -too many low mids

    -vocals need compression.

    -great tune

    -night.

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    Hey man...remixed yet?

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    Cool

    damn, Jamal, that is a very deep song.....and once again, very fine performances....since Chris has so many mixing suggestions, let HIM mix it....

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    Re: Oh For Christs Sake...

    "its a techno-rap like ..anti climactic sorta thing"

    Oh boy-sounds exciting! Let me zip on over and download this stat!

    "I can get saved on a pay-per-view special next week" heh. As usual great singing and some clever wordplay, welcome to the other 10% of the world...

    The mix sounds pretty good-sounds like your starting to use more of the sound spectrum...I hear a deepness in the bass area that I don't usually hear on your mixes----if your saying "wtf is he talking about?" you may be right-I don't know-it was a first impression....Bass drum sounds good-but I don't hear the snare too much-or the cymbals---If they were brought up some-you'd have the full spectrum covered IMO...The vocal track is excellent-but it took me a few listens to catch all the words-maybe bring up the vox some? Or cut a little mud zone ~350hz??? from the bass and guitar to make em stick out some more? Who knows-you could just always twiddle the knobs and have faith????

    Anyway good song-enjoyed it.
    "Hey man, am I drivin ok?" "You're stopped man"

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