Nothing is Sacred

[wargasms]

HIPHOP: Nothing is Sacred

http://www.soundclick.com/wargasmsmusic.htm

scroll down to "Nothing is Sacred - Rough Mix"

let me know what you think of the song.

The concept, iim an unstable, and obsessive individual
im suicidal because this girl rejected me,
Now i try to kill myself by driving head on into traffic.
i'll let you hear the rest...


anyway, please give me any tips i can use for this, i know its some parts i need to fix.

 

[wargasms]

this is hiphop by the way, forgot the label

 

[wargasms]

help, anyone?

 

[PrettyChica]

the verses are good. ur really good wit goin along wit the beat. You got great voice.

I just don't like the hook. sounds like the voices are seperated..sounds like they are scattered. (lol..i don't kno if dat make sense to u).

and i just don't like the devil voices in the background..it's kinda annoyin.

 

[PrettyChica]

I'd appreciate it if u leave me a feedback on my topic too?
https://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?threadid=114471

 

[soundboy]

You need to halla at ya boy this is tight keep it up yo peep my last couple of joints http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/darealbeatmakerz.htm