Thanks to everyone for listening to this song....special thanks to W.I.S.C. for "resurrecting" the thread! The song was recorded on my Akai DPS16.
Will try to provide a few quick answers/comments below....
W.I.S.C. - "Predictable Bridge/Refrain." You can say that again! Not one of my more imaginative efforts, I'm afraid. I like the song, and the lyrics are pretty "real" (about lack of communication with spouse), but I've always felt that I needed something "extra" in this one. Haven't found it yet.
Kramer - After I was finished, it struck me that the keyboard break in the middle reminded me of "Rocket Man." Originally, I had a Yamaha keyboard "saxophone" solo in there, but it sounded too fake. Adding the keyboard was the last thing I did. And although the Kinks were never a big personal fave, I do appreciate Ray Davies (love "Waterloo Sunset").
Kramer, Pt II - "Rhythm of the Rain." Ah, yes! The Cascades, I believe! Hadn't thought about it but, yes, you're right. Hell, my subconscious will steal ideas from anybody!
chrisharris - not sure what the cymbal problem is, other than the fact that they're fake (Alesis SR16). Aside from that, could be an MP3 issue.
bpoco - Drums are the Alesis, except that I added a live tambourine. The acoustics were recorded with my SP C1 mic. Two tracks of 12-string (Takamine) and one six-string track (Washburn). I hate the Washburn, so I made the Takamine more prominent. Eagles? Wouldn't call them a huge "influence," but I know and love their music. Actually, I've been listening to a lot of Wilco lately...there's a somewhat similar feel there. Harmonies? You're right, I should add.
Sorry for the long reply, but THANKS for the feedback. It's all constructive and is appreciated.